Thursday, 17 December 2009

Feedback On Our Practical

Female Advert:
:) Clear shots, good colour scheme, mise en scene is good and suits audience, sterotype of girl in advert is good, music is well suited to the advert.

:( One shot isn't cut right, doesn't flow with continuity, font at end "Amo Tu Vida" could be more feminine, have voice over at end sayin Amo Tu Vida.

Male Advert:
:) Music fits well, shots are really good and link together, editing is really effective.

:( perfume bottle isn't great, writing could be more original and a bit slower, make perfume shots brighter - they look too dull.

Sponsorship:
:) good music, female suits the product well

:( could have image of programme sponsoring

Unfortuntly our radio advertisment was on a different mac to the rest of our practical and we forgot to mention this so we have no feedback on this, however we know it is 100% full marks ;)

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