Finalising Coursework

After all the feedback (negative and positive) we were given we have now finally completed our coursework! :) changes we made are in previous blog :) once again ignore the strange writing across the advert :)

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Improvements To Make & Finally Videos Of Our Practical!

After the feedback we received from our peers and teachers we have listed the changes we are going to make to our tasks to improve them and hopefully come out with the best grade possible:

Male Advert: Add voiceover "Amo Tu Vida" at the end ( we did want to do this but didn't have enough time)

Female Advert: "Amo Tu Vida" at the end ( we did want to do this but didn't have enough time) try and change the font at the end to something more classy, but this proved difficult to do when I tried to on my practical last year!

Sponsorship: Add shots of Minty spraying the perfume on her, and edit the images that contain the lipstick as it could be perceived as advertising make up.

Radio: We didnt have any feedback on this, but we are pretty pleased with how it sounds so won't be making any changes, if we do make any we will blog what we have changed and why :)

I have finally managaged to add videos of our media to youtube although because it wouldnt regonise the file i had to chnage it on a strange website which is why there is writing across the video this isnt normally here! It did take me hourssss and hours to work out how to do this btw!

Comments much appreciated :)

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We will make the improvements listed as above and then upload our final piece :)