Improvements To Make & Finally Videos Of Our Practical!

After the feedback we received from our peers and teachers we have listed the changes we are going to make to our tasks to improve them and hopefully come out with the best grade possible:

Male Advert: Add voiceover "Amo Tu Vida" at the end ( we did want to do this but didn't have enough time)

Female Advert: "Amo Tu Vida" at the end ( we did want to do this but didn't have enough time) try and change the font at the end to something more classy, but this proved difficult to do when I tried to on my practical last year!

Sponsorship: Add shots of Minty spraying the perfume on her, and edit the images that contain the lipstick as it could be perceived as advertising make up.

Radio: We didnt have any feedback on this, but we are pretty pleased with how it sounds so won't be making any changes, if we do make any we will blog what we have changed and why :)

I have finally managaged to add videos of our media to youtube although because it wouldnt regonise the file i had to chnage it on a strange website which is why there is writing across the video this isnt normally here! It did take me hourssss and hours to work out how to do this btw!

Comments much appreciated :)

Male:



Female:



Tv Sponsorship:



Radio Advertisment:



We will make the improvements listed as above and then upload our final piece :)

Feedback On Our Practical From Teachers

(Level 4 being the best, 1 being the worst)

Sponsorship Advert
High Level 2 - very effective use of music, fast pace and editing. There is too much focus on the Mac lipstick and pink lipstick - this would be a better advert for Mac makeup! You should see the product in action through the girl at least spraying the perfume.

Girl Advert
Low Level 3- Great use of lighting and well filmed and edited. Consider a voice over at the end and try to change the titles to something more elegant/sophisticated.

Boy Advert
Level 3 - very good - snappy editing, appropriate music and again, well filmed. Add a male voice over and title at the end.

Radio
Unfortuntly our radio advertisment was on a different mac to the rest of our practical and we forgot to mention this so we have no feedback on this.

Feedback On Our Practical

Female Advert:
:) Clear shots, good colour scheme, mise en scene is good and suits audience, sterotype of girl in advert is good, music is well suited to the advert.

:( One shot isn't cut right, doesn't flow with continuity, font at end "Amo Tu Vida" could be more feminine, have voice over at end sayin Amo Tu Vida.

Male Advert:
:) Music fits well, shots are really good and link together, editing is really effective.

:( perfume bottle isn't great, writing could be more original and a bit slower, make perfume shots brighter - they look too dull.

Sponsorship:
:) good music, female suits the product well

:( could have image of programme sponsoring

Unfortuntly our radio advertisment was on a different mac to the rest of our practical and we forgot to mention this so we have no feedback on this, however we know it is 100% full marks ;)